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This is my soul
03.24.05 (6:41 am)   [edit]

This is my soul.  I found it in a box in the attic.
No really, go ahead and take it out and look at it.
Don't be afraid.  You can't hurt it.
Go ahead, poke it.  Try dropping it. 
You can even throw it against the wall.
It's very resilient.


This is my soul.  It was in the linen closet.
Folded in the darkness.  I thought I might take it out.
Hang it on the curtain rod.
No - it won't bleach out in the sunlight.
And it won't block out the sun from the room.
It's very translucent.


This is my soul.  I found it in the bathroom, under the sink.
I washed it off and it looks pretty good.
I had to take an old toothbrush to the cracks.
But now it's really shiny and reflective.
I thought I'd set it on the coffee table.  On a platter.
It's quite decorative.


This is my soul.  At first I didn't even know I had it.
But one day it was just there. Like a weed.
Like the poppy flower that blooms in the back yard.
By the swingset where I don't mow for weeks.
A lovely pink pom with a shady opium past. 
It's quite astonishing.


KMEOM

 


posted by: lindy (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (6:54 am)

wrote this?



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (7:05 am)

Reply to: lindy
yes. I'm pensive today.




posted by: aliciarose (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (7:23 am)

WOW....very good mrs. alt. :)

And yes, it is quite astonishing. :)



posted by: lindy (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (8:23 am)

Reply to: altricial

Ah. I shall let you dwell in your pensiveness. Try not to drown in it...



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (8:29 am)

Reply to: lindy
the definitions suggest nothing of water....

Deeply, often wistfully or dreamily thoughtful.
Suggestive or expressive of melancholy thoughtfulness.

Although, coincidentally enough, I have been very cold all day as my feet will not warm. So I am going to take a hot bath. I will take my pensiveness with me.



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (8:30 am)

Reply to: aliciarose
Thanks, sweet Alicia Rose. What a beautiful name you have.



posted by: lindy (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (8:38 am)

Reply to: altricial

It is easy to drown in sad thoughtfulness. Must be that darned ambiguity rearing its ugly head again. :)



posted by: zuki50 (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (12:34 pm)

Reply to: altricial
Good one.



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (1:40 pm)

Reply to: Godsmack
That's because it's diaphanous.



posted by: trekguy (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (4:23 pm)

Now you've made me smile!



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (4:45 pm)

Reply to: Godsmack
translucent. That's why you don't see it.



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (4:48 pm)

Reply to: trekguy
Awww, thanks! I really liked the way it turned out.



posted by: FinalyFree (reply)
post date: 03.24.05 (6:31 pm)

That's beautiful alt, and it has YOU written all over it. Of course I know that's the whole point, lol. I love the comparisons you use in each stanza.

Wonderful :)



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 03.25.05 (4:10 am)

Reply to: FinalyFree
Aww, thanks. What a lovely compliment. I was very pleased with the results, and it helped me work through a stressful morning.



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 03.25.05 (4:18 am)

Reply to: Lolita
Hey, sweets! Thanks!!! I just occured to me that that comment is very flexible... :oD
PS - I sent you a t-mail.



posted by: FinalyFree (reply)
post date: 03.25.05 (12:13 pm)

Reply to: altricial

You're welcome :)
You get rid of stress and the rest of us get a great read...sounds like a fantastic deal to me!

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