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Altricial
07.12.05 (4:58 pm)   [edit]

I came here altricial.  Naked and blind.  I slowly grew in fluffy down feathers, covering my nakedness and warming me.  I grew in my contour feathers and flight feathers.  And soon I stepped into the abyss and found myself soaring above the heavens, riding the thermals and owning the sky. 


I flew over mountains as a raptor.  I danced with the herons, hundreds of us creating fractal patterns in the sky.  I wandered across the ocean as an albatross, bringing fate to those I followed.


I even danced with the devil in the pale moonlight, a lesson not timely learned.


When I flew too high my eyes were opened and I saw Icarus fall, his melted wings tumbling with him from the sky.  Yet my wings, grown of my soul, were only singed.  And I was no longer blind.


And now I will join the Phoenix, in our nest of cinnamon twigs, to embrace a new incarnation, to join again with the soul of Ra. 


I leave naked,
Just as I came,
But no longer blinded,
And never the same.

 


posted by: SusanofPudlin (reply)
post date: 07.12.05 (5:15 pm)

Just as you leave, I finally get you.



posted by: jennjr (reply)
post date: 07.12.05 (5:18 pm)

Whatis it with all the good writers bolting?! Eep!

Are you setting up camp anywhere else? If you do, will you tmail me the location?



posted by: danggi (reply)
post date: 07.12.05 (8:53 pm)

Oh... I don't know what transpired here. What's going on?

I'll miss you, Alt! : (



posted by: wiccachicky (reply)
post date: 07.13.05 (12:52 am)

What the heck? Seriously - billyryan now you?!?! What is going on!?!?!?



posted by: trekguy (reply)
post date: 07.13.05 (2:31 am)

A needed break I take it. I await the day you write again, for I know it is part of you, part of your soul. If not here, then elsewhere.



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 07.13.05 (4:12 am)

Reply to: SusanofPudlin
Hahahaha! That made me laugh!!! Ironic on more than one level. ;oD



posted by: emptypseudonym (reply)
post date: 07.13.05 (2:27 pm)

Give a little whistle...


http://www.mp3search.ru/m3u.html?id=332459




posted by: xinnia (reply)
post date: 07.13.05 (4:51 pm)

my first time here...sorry it was as you were making your exit.



posted by: AmyLeeZealot (reply)
post date: 07.14.05 (2:04 pm)

That was very moving. Nicely written!



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 07.15.05 (11:53 am)

Reply to: jennjr
maybe ;oD



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 07.15.05 (2:15 pm)

Reply to: danggi
Thanks for the sweet comment. I'll try to visit often.



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 07.15.05 (2:16 pm)

Reply to: wiccachicky
Murky doings in blogland... :oP Seriously though, I'll be visiting...



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 07.15.05 (2:17 pm)

Reply to: emptypseudonym
Blogger's revenge: The killer earworm....

"It's a small world after all" is nice, too....



posted by: danggi (reply)
post date: 07.15.05 (10:31 pm)

Reply to: altricial
I'll look forward to that... Take care, Alt! *hugs*



posted by: billlyryan (reply)
post date: 07.17.05 (5:59 pm)

I love the wee.



posted by: MerMaid (reply)
post date: 07.18.05 (4:30 am)

You have impacted my life more than I could EVER tell you. Keep in touch. PLEASE!?!?!?!?!



posted by: childish (reply)
post date: 07.19.05 (12:03 pm)

You know, we are just "roaches scattering once the lights are on." according to the oh so compassionate and real Lindy and Juniperflex. They are having quite the self love fest over there congratulating themselves on driving people like you and me away with their cruelty.
Thank you for standing up for yourself.






posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 07.19.05 (6:31 pm)

Reply to: childish
Are they really two different people? I'm not sure which thought is more frightening.

At any rate, I can only be accountable to my own conscience. I can't break bread with the people in the white sheets and hoods, even when they take them off in their own houses.

People who spew hate and justify it in the name of virtue have a name. Many, in fact.



posted by: altricial (reply)
post date: 07.21.05 (8:50 am)

Reply to: Anastacia
No apology needed. You already are a good friend, anyway.



posted by: basild (reply)
post date: 08.05.05 (10:41 am)

I'm sorry to see you go, but many of us old timers are gone. I don't even blog anymore, although I do drop in from time to time. I'll miss your blog...
:(



posted by: Lezah (reply)
post date: 08.08.05 (9:36 pm)

awwww - come on back



posted by: Dariana (reply)
post date: 11.15.05 (4:51 am)

Entrancing!



posted by: ShyDevil (reply)
post date: 08.16.06 (7:06 am)

You, knew me as Atronoch or Montana. You gave me a purpose. I came back here looking for you. Looking for maybe a bit more guidance. But alas my master is gone. What shall I do But go my own way. Only a student can purposefuly carry on what is taught. Just a kid looking for trouble. Though you may not realize it you kept me out of more than I could handle thank you. Maybe you will never know, but a strangers words/touch hold more to me than you'll know. good luck and you will always be my second mother

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